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WIP Flash Intro by =AtimistFox:iconAtimistFox:

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©2009 =AtimistFox
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Artist's Comments

Just something I started yesterday and I nowhere NEAR done... but I felt like submitting something, getting some feedback and ideas as to where to go from here...
I'm basically doing an 'Into' type thing, where my characters are well... being introduced...

Ummmm... I guess enjoy my 1/2 assed work

Music (c) Jason Aldean 'She's Country'
Atimist and Acturon (c) Myself

Critiques


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*duragan May 6, 2009, 11:22:01 PM
This is a brilliant piece of animation right here :)

The start this flash is constructed brilliantly with the red lines coming in and font appearing just like a professional movie intro. The red dots chasing the character adding like a hail of bullets shooting at the character before they perform an epic action pose to leap and escape and finally show the official logo is a very nice touch

I can't say there is anything worth pointing out which effects the quality of this movie, however one minor note to point out is that when the white circle flips upside down, the character moves left and right slightly if you can see carefully. But that isn't really anything to worry about it too much ^^

Fantastic work all the way in this. Great choice of animation techniques and music
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~MasterX-Con Apr 22, 2009, 4:39:20 PM
I feeling vary nice today! 5 out of 5 YOU ARE WINNER HA HA HA HA YOU ARE WINNER HA HA HA HA!

Vision:Its as bad ass as you are! <----best comment ever!5/5

Originality: Im Likeing more and more each time <-----ohh 5/5

Technique:YEA! <-----YEA!5/5

Impact:My brain is bleading from the awesomeness <------ Oi YA! 5/5

I Subscribed to deviantart and feel obligated to leave of half ass Critique! the music is sweet. I like it . you could easily turn this into your flash intro^^
(I DO LIKE IT and I hope I raised your self esteem. I know I raised mine)
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~Darkfox-15 Apr 22, 2009, 4:31:12 PM
wait a minute... Acutron and Atimist are the same dude????? O_OO_OO_OOO_OO_OO_OO_OO_OO_OO_OO_OO_O
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=Onni-Hitsok Apr 22, 2009, 4:52:49 PM
Well thats interesting, Looks like something to see, When its further completed.

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And from wolfs were born Humans.
The wolf spirit lives in my soul
I AM ONNI GREYWOLF

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*DTRD Apr 22, 2009, 4:54:05 PM
I feel like I'm watching a mix of Teen Titans and Goldeneye. O:

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*darkelite9 Apr 22, 2009, 5:01:41 PM
Great work! I love it. ^^ But, I would appreciate a preloader for future flash videos (has sucky internet >.<;)

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=DT-Fox Apr 22, 2009, 5:12:01 PM
DTRD's right.
"When there's trouble you know who to call: Fast Forward!
From their tower they can see it all; Fast Forward!"

This is pretty well made. You keep surprising me :D

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I'm never wrong!
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~killmemarzgurl Apr 22, 2009, 5:27:18 PM
That's Awesome! Hope you finish it soon!
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~ChosenDude Apr 22, 2009, 5:33:31 PM
well.... you probably already know this, but the running animation is kinda choppy.... but i mean, i dunno anything about flash, that's just an observation.

Anyway, this looks AWESOME, i really looks forward to seeing acutron's ^^

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[link] =D

Being gay must suck balls
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~ByondRAGE Apr 22, 2009, 6:03:21 PM
sweet dude! :D
reminds me of james bond openings, but without girls jumping out of guns XP

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There really isn't any point.
But it's good fun, isn't it?
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~RisGrestarSFX Apr 22, 2009, 6:26:36 PM
well, even though its just a wip, i thought it was pretty cool :D

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[link]
Go ahead an join^^
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~WolfeZ Apr 22, 2009, 6:33:45 PM
Woah, thats one nice flash!
Its WIP? Oooo, cant wait for the rest of the flash to be shown xD

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