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great work atty! im hoping you win it!
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I feel that while the bevel looks good inside the paw, it doesn't work for the text; it kind of makes it hard to read, actually. In the spirit of the simplicity here, I think plain text with an outline at most would be all that's needed. I also think raising it up and pushing it to the left just a little would be stronger compositionally--It looks to close to the edge right now.
Giving it that shiny, glossy look definitely makes a logo look sleek, but I don't think the gradients in the corners provide enough contrast to successfully create that texture. Having a slightly darker value around the white of the glow usually enhances that glassy look.
Nice work! Good luck in the contest.
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